Amazingly kind in her criticisms.

Hayley Swinson-White took my novel that I had just drastically rewritten, and she turned it into a stunner. Her attention to detail and the congruity of the story were invaluable in pulling multiple story threads together into a cohesive whole. She caught things that I and my experienced beta readers hadn’t noticed, she had excellent suggestions for enhancing character development, and she made my book shine. She was also amazingly kind in her criticisms and helped me develop my own ideas for improvements. I can’t wait to have another book ready for an edit so that I can hire Hayley again.